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It's A Date (Belarus x Reader) NEW VERISON

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It was a harsh, cold, snowing night. It was late at night, only light could be seen was the lamp on the porch for any unexpected visitors (and if a certain someone comes around). You heard a knock at the door, you jumped up from the kitchen table and went to see who it was. You opened the door to see petite girl, with long platinum hair. "Natalya.."

"Great, just great.."
You thought, wishing she wasn't here. Natalya wasn't very fond of your relationship with Ivan, you didn't want her to get it the wrong way, but she did. The only reason you even knew Ivan was because of his position of power, and became quite fond of his personality and his older sister. Natalya was a different story, and once she found out about your relationship with him, she wasn't the happiest of people.

"Ah! Hello Miss Natalya. May I ask why you have come here?" You said, stepping aside to let her come in. She walked in, you could she was being very cautious with her actions. You closed the door, but keeping an watchful eye on Natalya still. "I would have fix the place up, but I didn't know you were coming! Would you like some tea or- No" She said, annoyance could be heard in her voice. "Well, if you prefer that." You said, submitting to her wish.

Natalya was a strong woman, and you knew she could easily make you fall to the ground in less than a minute. The only thing that also caught you off guard was her attitude towards many things, she took everything a different things in many different ways. You couldn't really explain it, no matter how hard you tried.

"(Name)" Natalya said, facing towards you. "I wanted to tell you something I could not earlier." She bit her lip lightly, looking away from (Name). "Can you go on-" She stopped in the middle of sentence, hesitating to speak another word. "I wanted to know if you could... GO ON A DATE WITH ME!" She yelled, almost to the top of her lungs, blushing madly. She couldn't look in the face after what she asked, she was too embarrassed to even take a glance at you. All you could do was stand there, shocked to the words that fell out of her mouth. Everything was to sudden, making you go off track from what just happen in these few minutes with her.

"Sure. I would love too!" She replied back to Natalya, hesitating at first, but after finishing you sentence, you didn't anymore. Natalya's eyes widen in shocked from your words, she smiled. "I'm glad." She said, with that beautiful smile of hers.








"Now, let's you out of those clothes, and into something more comfortable."

Yes, this is a new version of my first reader fanfic. I wanted to fix it, just some grammar and make it look nicer. I can't believe so many people liked this story, it wasn't suppose to be like this as all! Even if so, I am very grateful for your kindness to accept me and not bash my ways. 

 

(Constructive criticism is always liked, but complaining how I write isn't going to work in anyway.) 

(C) Himaruya Hidekaz 

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"Now, let's you out of those clothes, and into something more comfortable." I almost fell out of my seat when i read this